Here's Lustplorers #1 Page 3, I was in two minds to add sound word/s on this page, every time I added a sound word to the last image it didn't look right. I have always done my comics without sound words and I may stick to that and let people imaginations make the sounds, it would make it easier on me :D I did do a test out with sound words on a earlier comic but finding it a little hard :rolleyes: You can download the full HD comic page in the download link, enjoy and let me know what you think or can you guess what happens next ;)
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Sound words are awkward, it's better that way. Unless it's something important, or something that's happening outside of the frame. Like knock on the door and whatnot.
ReplyDeleteThe page looks good. I'm not into this machine sex, but if you make a good story, I'm in.
I agree off/out frame sound words be easier and the pant of sex like ah, aah, ah I'm fine with in the image :D
DeleteIt's not only going to be machine sex, there's going to be different types (not saying, you need to wait) ;)